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Babu
Babu Dec 12 '18
It was Noon. 

Scorching heat.

Nowhere to hide.

Suddenly there  were a few drops.

The atmosphere became cool.

A Auto rickshaw came along my side. 

I asked  the driver to take me to Jantar Manthar.

He said Rs.100/-. I said OK.

He dropped me there.

Lot of youngsters roaming about.

Some in pairs.

 A few oldies too.

They were interested n chatting.

No one seemed to be interested in the Place.

May  be they were coming for the 100th time or so.

I walked as I liked.

Then I took some rest.



This is a different way of writing. If any of you "like"

say so, I will continue...


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burao
burao Dec 12 '18
I like it. Please continue.
Babu
Babu Dec 13 '18
Thanq BURao and VAS.
Sabarmathy
Sabarmathy Dec 14 '18
I like it.
Babu
Babu Dec 14 '18
Thanks S.Mathy.
silaka41146
silaka41146 Dec 14 '18
I am Murthy Akella ,Retired bank officer ,recently re-joined . please continue your writing.

Silaka411

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The Forum post is edited by silaka41146 Dec 14 '18